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I need girls names that start with A, K, and R

And boys names that start with A, S, and A

Ok 

I really don't know what to call this but this is where I vent out my anger on fan fiction cliches so here we go.


  Why is a word that I say to much through out this very cringey book which in the next week I will try to make scheduled dated when I update the book, write like a normal person, try to improve the quality of the entire book, try to do proper endings instead of I'm lost , Bye , and I'm done and rage quit, explore into new fandom, and many other things I wanted this to be like my first fan fic review in the book, like it I mean funny, two parted, and thought out more. Plus I write these reviews during language class with my friend sitting by my side closing my computer when it's too cringey and I thankful for that, and her telling me there children even though they cuss out at me when I try to give criticism. Well what I mean by all of this is that I want to make this book better, not like the other twelve year old girls on the site writing fan fiction, I want to improve my writing for you guys but know this is a boring wall of text and you came here for me to vent out my anger.


  Why, is there cliches that even should be cliches like for example falling in love with the person who kidnapped you.This shouldn't  even be a thing because they robbed you and other things I will not bring up but the main one is having your job be a singer and they get an amazing applause but then again there in a coffee shop. In real life a singer will not get you any money you have to be a famous one at least but ,when she is "famous" as the authors say when get mad at me. How come they don't have enough money for them to play in a stadium, why are they just singing songs in a coffee shop. I really don't get it, plus the time they sing the song the entire song lyrics is in the book. I'M PRETTY SURE THAT YOU SHOULDN'T MAKE THE READER READ UNNECESSARY SONG LYRICS.


    And why do they live in a house with room mates if they are so famous, why do they have weird eye colors, why do they hang out at the mall if they could be chased down by fan girls. These are things we will never find out, because most of the time they will say she has "magic" powers. Why they would "magic" powers if it's an One Direction X OC book? Well readers ,who clicked on this book to read,we  will never know because there off reading other fan fictions and defending there characters, instead of doing the right thing doing character development, but with out it you wouldn't be reading this book.

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