Welcome back to a thirteen year old girl rambling on about how fan fiction is bad today instead of updating my Aphmau Fanfic Reviews book, I'm updating this one. So what are we reading today, the shipping of to guys who are strait, unexpected alternate universe where every character has cancer, a crossover with undertale. Nope none of those things, today I'm reviewing Zane X Blue , such creative title ten out of ten, and the read to find out in the description is the cherry on top.
It starts with her moving in with Aphmau, I don't get this because all there rooms are taken up this is why Vylad sleeps in the basement.Well slept because all we know is that Vylad could be dead he lived in the basement and I really don't know if he went to Love Love except for the mini games, remember when they did a Pokemon Go one man that one was weird. But Blu without an E because original character do not steal. Because of the laws of fan fiction it states "The OC or Y/N shall meet thy character that thy are shipped with on the first page," And this is true for most of fan fics and ,you know who her sister is, it's Kawaii Chan. But this OC doesn't have cat ears, and time skip which means they are somewhere important, they are at some random park with Garroth, Laurence, Vylad, Dante, Travis, Aaron, Reese, and Deathlord Zane are there. If she is introducing her to her friends where is Nicole, Candenza, Katelyn, Kawaii Chan, and my favorite Lucinda. I guess she didn't want competition for Zane.
The thing wrong with Zane being out of character, is that he sings when talks and its the edgy Vocaloid songs. I would just awkwardly cringe if a person who I just met if they sang edgy song lyrics for every response.And then time skip to the basement because XD .If I were to go anywhere in Aphmau's house it would be the living room because shipping shrine, and Vylad lives in the basement, it says she lives in the basement, is this a Vylad X Blu. And they start talking about Vocaloid which ups the cringe factor along with them bringing up the great horror author Stephan King or if your Beverly Goldberg Stefan King. Which bringing up Stephan King makes me cringe because they like watching horror movies. Which Zane doesn't like horror movies he has been chased down by Kawaii Chan and her Army or Zane Chan Shippers.And A mere reminder that this is the end of the first page.
Second page could be worse and it probably is and it starts of with Zane over here walking to Aphmau's house to see his UNREQUITED LOVE, Blu with out an E is singing more Dark Vocaloid songs because she is about as edgy as a square.And you know whats she's doing, she is about to cut herself. THIS IS A CHILDRENS SHOW NOT AN HBO ORIGINAL SERIES. And then Kawaii Chan bursts in knowing nothing and just finding out Blu was cutting herself and after that she listens to Nightcore dubstep, when was this written again. And now she sings another song while Aphmau is letting her cut herself.
Third page let us have hope and Zane cuts himself geez man put down the knives and then fourth page it's the BATTLE OF THE BANDS. Really! REALLY! YOU USE A CHEAP SITCOM TACTIC TO MOVE YOUR STORY IT'S A WATTPAD BOOK NOT THE BRADY BUNCH! I bet she wins after she meets a girl who is the popular snob and also has a love for zane and beats her so hard zane will go with the lead, hey just like a Disney channel movie.Well it turns out there is no girl for Zane he smiled for the very first time.And then what Zane falls in love with her of course and then go out. Like me right now trying to through away all the knives in the Mystreet universe. You know how I do it. Well no you don't this is the first time but know I only review the first four to six pages in a book unless it's so bad.
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Try to write a fan fic for any fandom where everyone is a pirate and post it in the comments bellow.
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Bad FanFic and Reviews
RandomThis includes self insert,character X reader,character x character,and telling you how not to write bad fanfic.To any requested fandom. I also use a lot of sarcasm.
