Hello! I am proud of this story, and I want it to be great. I would love constructive criticism.
This is my first long story, so don't expect anything award winning.
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Blood of the Ancients
FantasíaEver since science uncovered the amazing power of the ancients, which had been left unnoticed for years, the world got a lot more interesting. This story focuses on James, and his adventures in his academy.
Author's Note 2
Hello! I am proud of this story, and I want it to be great. I would love constructive criticism.
This is my first long story, so don't expect anything award winning.