Another FEMALE saiyan??

whaddya think?

Guys, I'm thinking of writing a Naruto FF on my/paws account, K1ttyPaw5. But before I do, i wanna know what yous think. Pure honesty, nothing more, nothing less. So please crisis it. Here's the description: 'I'm going to bury you with my sound'
'You don't like that? Or do you just not like me?!'
'Sorry that I exist'
'Is it just you and me and the wreckage of the world?' -Marceline (from Adventure time)
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Marceline Abadeer is a 14 year old outcaste. Being older then all her classmates makes it hard to fit in, along with the fact she wasn't born in the Leaf. Even the most hated boy in the leaf avoided her.

Ouch.

Believe it or not, she was more hated then Naruto, the Kyuubi host. But thing was, she had no clue why everyone hated her. Was it her sharp teeth? Scars on her neck? Her Axe-Guitar? Or how she dressed?

Marceline has a few dark secrets. Ones that could possibly get her killed, on top of her dark past. But how will she react when she finds out certain elders, sanin and rouge ninjas are after her and the blood that runs through her veins.

How will she deal with all the stress on her shoulders, or if she does? Will she finally make some friends with her new team? Or will they reject her, like everyone else?

Why is she so hated? Will she fall inlove and be lifted into the light or drown in her hate and darkness? How will she survive in this cruel and dark world?
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Hi everyone, I hope you enjoy my story.
I sadly don't own Naruto or Marceline. I do however own this FanFiction, even though jack shit in its mine. Sad. Anyway, don't be afraid to criticise my writing. Tough love right? Tell me how I can improve and if you enjoy it or not.
Bye

~K1tty

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Would any one read this? If you guys like Naruto of course. But seriously, does it sound good? Does it interest you? I NEED ANSWERS GUYS XD!