LOOK I AM TIRED OF PEOPLE NOT BEING HONEST WITH ME, ABOUT MY WRITING IF IT IS CHEEZY TELL ME. I OBVIOUSLY NEED TO KNOW. I CANT GET ANY BETTER WITHOUT IT. I KNOW MY GRAMMAR SUCKS. SO THATS NOT REALLY WHAT I NEED ADVICE ON. IF YOU WANT TO BE MY EDITOR, JUST ASK BUT SERIOUSLY. I AM SO SICK OF BEING TOLD MY STORY IS GOOD. TELL ME THE TRUTH. THE ONLY ONE THAT HAS SO FAR IS JORGE. THANK YOU BTW (IF YOU READ THIS)
Thanks guys!! :D