Reviews

2: Blackmail

Blackmail by: Anonymous_fiend
Is yet another fairy tail high school story. But this story is one of a kind in my book.

This story is about 99% original. The 1% is for natsu to have a kid, which is a pretty common thing in nalu (with Lucy or not), but on the other side this story come it to play when you look at high school life/collage.

When lucy and Natsu both start with the blackmail, Lucy hates his guts, but soon found that when he is a father and all he balances on his plate, he not that bad of a person. He can be sweet and loveable, and sometimes a jerk, but that's what she loves about him.

The author always had a perfect idea of what to do next. And never let the readers down.

I really recommend blackmail as a book you should read!

*for the author*
I love from the front page to the last page (all of it!!!) it was one of my favorite books to read on wattpad.

Keep writing!!! You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

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So this is the analysis part... Let's get started! Today, Blackmail, by Anonymous_fiend !

Character Personality Accuracy:

Very accurate! I love the way Author portrayed 18 year old Natsu, Lucy, Levy, and everyone else. Only thing I would comment on would be Natsu's slightly demanding nature, but I feel like it fits, so...10/10!

Word Use:

Author seems to stick with a mildly simplistic vocabulary when it comes to this book, however, it fits the style of the book perfectly, and they will add vibrant descriptions that counteracts the flow and sucks you in. 9/10!

Amount of Description:

The amount of description in this book is a little minimalist, and makes sure to showcase the plot. It's a great style for the book! 9/10

Balance of plot and character building:

The balance here is a tad off kilter, but Author pulls it off well! We don't exactly need much character building here, so having the story be plot central is perfect. 10/10!

Plot and Cliche-ness:

Wow! All I have to say with this one! Beautiful, tragic, Very original, creative! Truly, the author must have had a stroke of genius to write this book! 10/10

Pacing:

Hmmm. Well, I do have to comment on this. To be honest, the pacing in the book is a little fast. I feel like the plot speed is fast, but it's not all bad. For a lot of people, they like the fast paced action of the books like this, so it does appeal to certain audiences, but for me, I'm a fairly slow and steady kinda person, mainly with relationships in literature. I do enjoy the visible change in opinions from Lucy's perspective though. 6/10, not to bad :)

Grammar:

Author's grammar is normal for our age. Her and Sky have very similar writing styles, and they also have very similar grammar. Only thing that really jumped out at me the first time I read was the not starting a new paragraph when someone would talk. But, I feel like they did an overall good job! 8/10

Spelling:

So I'm going to be counting the emojis they use in their chapters in here too. The overall spelling of the book isn't bad, a couple of things jumped out at me, but I tend to have very nit picky views of everything. I say the spelling is good! 9/10!

Realistic Emotions:

Author, you did great with this. The emotions in this books were pretty realistic considering everything that's happened to Lucy, all here emotions are more or less justified. 9/10!

Realistic Relationships:

I said more or less for a reason with Lu's feelings. Natsu and Lucy's relationship seems a tad rushed, but with that, it seems it would be very realistic if it went a little slower. Other than that, Lu's relationship with everyone else seems very justified! 7/10, good job!

Total Score by Italics: 87! Nice job! That's a B+! Keep on writing Author!

*For author*

I really don't know you at all, but you seem like a great writer, and I really want you to keep doing what you do! You genuinely seem like a great person, and a very creative one too! Your stories, they're great, and I really love Blackmail. It was a very entertaining and I think that you did amazing. Keep up the great work!

(I feel like such a bad person I'm so sorry if I sounded harsh)