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3: dreams come true

What is with me and fairy tail high school? I have no idea but any let's start with this book.

Dreams come true by :angel_samm_anime

For a book to be 100% original it's a very rare sight and yet this author has. The author starts with a wonderful dream, that both Natsu and Lucy have about the other. Instantly they both fall in love yet only questions come from the dream. After Lucy moves and starts school she sees him, the boy in her dream, and he sees her, the girl from his dream.

Within the wonderful and heart-jerking story about them, we see sting fail at Lucy's heart, which was rightly stolen by Natsu.
Lucy, not only getting kidnaped, once but twice, by very bad men.

And Natsu fall into a coma, now if your still there, you'll see that Lucy and Natsu even with ALL of their messed up worlds they still stay together... well most of the time... it's a true "dream come true".

*For the author:  *
I loved it from its creativity in what each character does through out the story, to the never-get-boring plots and cliffhangers. It wouldn't surprise me if you get into the top 100 fanfic list. I truly believe that your writing can take you places.
Keep being awesome!!!

Sorry if I came off as a little mean in this review.

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So Sky really rushed me...I have dark circles and a bad headache, let's go!

Character Personality Accuracy: I would say that from what I have seen, the personalities are fairly accurate, however, some of their dialogue doesn't flow like it normally does,, but still good job! 8/10

Word Use: The word use here is not as vibrant, however, it provides a homey, comfortable feel. I quite like the word use here. 10/10

Amount of Description: There wasn't an excessive amount of description, and it was balanced with dialogue, plot, and action. I do have to say, the flow from description to action/dialogue/plot with a little rough but overall, nice! 8/10  

Balance of plot and character building: Being a fan fic, there wasn't much character building to done, but everyone is portrayed well, as you can see above. They did add a few characters, and I feel like their personalities were portrayed well. 10/10

Plot and Cliche-ness: Woah. Really, this plot is very original, and a tad cliche, but in a good way,  and the plot is so creative and interesting, that it's going to get a perfect score! 10/10

Pacing: The pacing is fast and quick, and the story is full of action and conflict. I am the kind of person that likes a break from the action once or twice, but I feel the book pulled it off fairly well! 9/10

Grammar: The grammar here is okay, and is very good compared to a lot of fan fictions I've read. There were a couple of mistakes, but unless you're the grammar police like me, it literally has no impact. 9/10

Spelling: The spelling is phenomenal, and really appreciate that. I write in Docs, so I have spell check (thank the universe for that), but if you write in Wattpad, it's very difficult. So... 10/10

Realistic Emotions: I don't really have much to comment on, other than the fact that the author did a good job with this. Everyone stayed true to normal human emotions, and didn't go, "I hate you with a burning passion," directly after seeing them for the first time, for no good reason. 10/10

Realistic Relationships: Same ething as with the other one, the characters don't just say, "Marry me!" after three chapters. 10/10

Total Score by Italics: 94! Nice job Author!

*For author*
I didn't get to read all the chapters of your book, however, I'm going to read all of it when I can. It's amazing, what I've read. So good job! You have a lot skill, and are definitely using it!