OK I understand if your a beginner writer but if you write like this:
Cris walks inside and cries. Mom comes out and hugs him. Cris can hear ghost since he was six.
"What's wrong" ask mom
This
Is
Fucking
Boring
Cris stumbled in the house feeling heavier than usual. It was happening again and it scared him. His hard demeanor broke as he began to wail out of frustration. His mother hearing this, rushed out.
This is better...please stop writing like you have no idea what the fuck your doing. Its not hard to type on the internet a thesaurus or dictionary. At some adjectives.
YOU ARE READING
The Book
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