This story has been fun the right and I'm happy its getting viewed this battle is will have some interesting events
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After the explosion happened Ash looked into the smoke and his eyes were wide there in the smoke stood beedrill unharmed "How?" Ash asked. "Simple I've learned that if you are going to use a big attack be careful of what they use for instance I used protect. It's good to have that now if you would like we shouldn't hold back don't you agree." King challenged "Yes I do its time we don't hold back unfortunately because of the destroyed map we got to not hold back for one final attack" Ash said. "Alright son lets go" King replied "Beedrill use your poison jab, Knock off, and fire off poison sting, Beedrill fires off many of razor sharp needles and goes in for the poison jab. "Charizard use blast burn!" Ash called out. Charizard took the poison stings and finally the poision jab and stumbled but was focused enough to use his final attack. Bedrill was to tired to dodge and took the finishing blow....
The smoke after the blast clouded the field, when it cleared both were standing barly. Before Charizard collapsed before bedrill too collapsed. King had won but only just. Ash looks down before realising something "hey were in the public why don't we hear the croud?" King replied "Well we normally would but did you not notice we are somewhere completely different" he replied before snaping his fingers the scenery changed until they were back at Ash's campsite. King turned to Ash and said "Ash I'm proud of you and good luck out there." Ash repies "Thanks dad hope we can battle again." King nods before leaving, once out of sight Ash sends out charizard and says "remember your training tonight, we nearly beat dad I'm proud now tonight it is gonna rain remember real rain is stronger than artifical because if a pokemon created real rain they would collapse because of the power it takes to create now because of your match you will be weaker to make it harder. So when we try it us sunny day if it stopps the rain then we wil find a harder training spot.
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I'm sorry this ones short I thank you all for supporting this
