Hello everyone thanks so much for the support I continue to write when I see that people are enjoying it and it's because of you guys that I make these stories happen soon I will be making longer chapters and you will see some familiar faces...
______________________________________Ash finds a nice spot to rest and lets his pokemon out he tells everyone "your doing great I'm proud of you all." He says with a smile. His pokemon smile then fades knowing whats coming next. Ash smirks "that means we have to train." A loud groan comes from his group of pokemon. They know the drill they all have some ability that has been inproved (Breloom's arms growing) then they find a partner and train only using that ability and using power up moves. Ash relaxes before he feels a presence "Who's there?" Ash calls out, out of the bushes came out Max looking a little scared. "By what right do you stand before me runt?" Ash Asks coldly, Max replies "I just beat tobias in a battle barly but he didn't train his pokemon they were weaker than a champions should be. It's because of you that he no longer is some immortal figure with legendaries. He is just someone who can't train." Ash starts laughing "So why did you tell me alone and not with May, Brook, or even Dawn?" Max gets mad "You speak of them so casually, Why? They hurt you Ash... so much and now they have hurt me."
Ash looked shocked "How'd you know that I'm Ash." Max looking scared says "When you were talking to your pokemon so kindly I knew it was you so now you wanna know why I'm here." Ash nodds, Max starts to cry "May, Dawn, and Misty said your weaker than shadow so your useless to us we can't gain fame from you get lost max! As I turned around I overheard now if we could get Shadow to befriend us then we will be fine, we will try tommorow. I saw you leaving into to forest and I wanted to become strong after they told me to kick it I wanted to become your student..." Ash stares off into space for what seems like a hour and looks at Max before saying "Alright I'll train ya but listen it will be hell and painful but your pokemon will make it through now first off were sleeping out here." Max over comes his shock before saying "Ash I'm so sorry thank you for this and I promise I won't let you down he smiles"
______________________________________This ones mainly a conversation and it's mainly because Max grew on me and believe me next chapter it gets interesting as the tournament goes to the next level. Once again thank you all soon I will be posting more often
