Hey guys as always leave your comments if y'all think there is something I could do better
Mike POV
I was pulled from sleep suddenly by a loud squeak. I looked frantically around and noticed the Percy was still asleep and that the two stones Eragon had given us where still in their places then payed back down to try to go to sleep. Just as I could feel my mind start to shut down another loud squeak happened. This time even Percy woke up. We looked at each other then looked around and were both shocked to see the stones rocking back and forth on the floor.
The blueish green stone had a fine layer of cracks webbing across. Then it split open revealing a blue green form laying on the floor of the cabin. It moved slightly then looked at Percy and I. Then something came over me I don't know what, but I touched the thing sitting on our floor. A white hot pain shot through me and my limbs grew very cold and I couldn't move. I eventually passed out from pain.
I woke up many hours later with a blue-green lump sitting on my chest. When I woke up if squeaked happily in seeing that I had finally woken up. Then I felt something brush against my mind and quickly shied away from it. I had never had that feeling before and it was very scary to me because it felt like something had fallen away from my mind and without it I would be able to float away from my body.
I looked over at Percy and a thought passed between us just by the look on his face I could tell what he was thinking. "not a stone, an egg" I didn't quite understand it, but then I looked at the blueish green mass sitting on my chest and realized with a shock that this thing had popped out of the stone. Then it hit me "duh that wasn't no stone it was an egg" and then I looked over and saw the other egg, for it couldn't have been anything else, crack open just like the blue-green one's did and out came another small form. It looked at me then at Percy then crawled over to me and again I had the urge to touch it. As I did a slight tingling went down my arm, but the shock and pain didn't come again as I thought it would.
OK guys I haven't exactly updated in a while and im sorry for that I will try to update at least once a week from now on but if I don't then im sorry I will be busy with a job and school and all so ya. Any way thanks for reading my story try to comment what yall think I should do better or any suggestions like the names of the two dragons cause I haven't exactly got many ideas
