How Allegiant Should Have Ended

Tobias POV ch3

Tobias POV

When I wake up the first thing I see is her ravens. They are strong and beautiful like her! I start to get up and then she wakes up and I apologize for waking her but she didn't even care, just fell right back asleep because it had been a long day before and it was still very early only I was up. After I had showered I decided I needed to get some air so I wrote a note to Tris so she wouldn't worry about me. As I walked outside I found myself on a train toward Navy Pier. When I got there I went straight towards the Ferris wheel. Then out of no where I began to climb I didn't even realize how high I was until I looked down. If I fell I would die, but I didn't think I would fall so I kept climbing until I got to the top. When I got to the top I could see all over the city. I wish Tris was here right now. I better start getting back I wouldn't want to worry her. As I was walking down the streets all I heard was a scream. Tris' scream. So Iran towards the source just to see her being dragged away by my father. MARCUS.

Tris POV.

When I woke I immediately saw the note.

T,                              

Needed some air just went for a walk. Love you!

T

I needed some air too. So I walked outside and saw Marcus he put his gun to my head and said, " your coming with me!" " why" I screamed. " Because Tobias will come and get you so then I can kill two birds with one stone. Maybe more if he brings your little friends!"

"You do know when he finds you he will kill you without thinking twice."

" Don't be stupid Tris I will kill you before he does that. "

Then he punched me in the head and the whole world went black. Darkness like when I almost died. ENDLESS. DARKNESS.