How Allegiant Should Have Ended

Tris POV ch.4

Tris Pov

When I wake up I hear hushed whispers of Tris are you here. I wanted to scream that I was but It hurt too much and my mouth was taped shut. Marcus left me here alone? Why would he do that I asked myself. Then it hit me, he was still here just waiting to kill Tobias. I had to warn him! So I screamed Marcus is in the house guys get out don't let him get to you. Its a trap! Then everything went dark again.

When I woke up there was a gun on my head. Luckily I warned them otherwise they would be here too. Then Marcus said, " Now look at what you have done. You could e gone by now. I wouldn't have to do this but now I do. Next time he will come prepared. Now I will teach you a lesson." Then he called Tobias' phone number and took off his belt. Oh God is all I could think. Oh God. Oh. God. Then Tobias picked up he said, " Where is Tris? What have you done to her?" I said, " I am okay, I am fine don't come for me he will just kill both of us!' Then Marcus whipped me and I screamed. Then he did it again and again and again. Again. The last thing I heard before I blacked out was Tobias saying I will rescue you Tris.

Tobias Pov

When I picked up my phone I knew it was Marcus. I said, " Where is Tris? What have you done to her?" Then I hear her say she is fine. I was so relieved. then she said, " Don't come for me its a trap. He will kill you when you come! He almost did last time." Then I just heard screaming. endless screaming. She was in pain, being hurt, tortured, whipped. it was as if I could feel her pain, which I probably could because I went through it but not Tris and she never should have. I wanted to protect her. now I have to save her! As soon as I hang up the phone I am running out the door. Christina knows where I am going, grabs two guns and ammo and chases after me. I tell her go home I don't want you getting hurt too. But she just says," I am coming with you whether you like it or not!" 

" But you don't understand. Its a trap Marcus is going to kill us. He just tortured Tris."

" No Tobias I am coming with you no matter what, she may be your girlfriend but she is my best friend!"

"Fine"

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Tris' Pov

All I hear is Tobias knocking the door down. No why didn't he listen to me? Is it because I screamed? I knew I should have held it in. Wait but this time Tobias came prepared. Tobias is prepared but so is Marcus!  Bang is all I hear!

BANG

Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed this because I know enjoyed writing it! I know I have been updating a lot but its just because I am enjoying writing this so much! Sorry about the cliff hanger. I just had to do it. I will update soon.

Yours Truly,

morganroxi46