How Allegiant Should Have Ended

Ch. 6

Tris' Pov

As I pulled into the hospital both Christina and Tobias were unconscious. I was getting worried they would go into a coma because of all the blood loss. I had to drag them both into the hospital at the same time. When the nurse saw me she immediately got a room ready. She asked me," Would you like them in different rooms or in the same?" " In the same so people can visit them at the same time." Then we brought them into room 3B. I had to leave the room because they both had to go through emergency surgery! I left the hospital after a hour to shower because I was full of blood and it was a 12 hour-long surgery. Life saving they called it! After I got out of the shower I drove, yes actually drove to Marcus' house to see if he was dead or not. When I got there he was still on the floor unconscious where I left him! So I had to decide kill him now or let Tobias kill him when he is healed, if he ever heals. But I quickly pushed that thought out of my mind! I decided to kill him then in case he pulled a gun on me. So I pulled out my gun put the gun by his ear and shot passed it to wake him up. And he sure did! H totally freaked out. He even begged me not to kill him but I ignored that! I just shot right through his head and laughed a dark laugh that I never wanted to laugh again. I shot another time to make sure he was dead! He was. So I went back to the Hospital. When I got to the hospital the nurse came ruin to me. She said, " They are both in a coma!" Oh no I thought and ran to their room. They looked so peaceful. Luckily the surgery went well. If it didn't I think I would have died.