possible editing

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Okay, so it is clear that this story isn't very good, but I'm not going to delete it. But I might consider editing it.

I still will not delete or not include any important events, but I will just be making the quality of the story in general a lot better.

This will include:

correct format and spacing

longer chapters

better grammer and punctuation

better flowing story

better-to-understand dialogue

Obviously, I am not the best writer on the website.

I'm more like the worst. But, if you don't like my story, remeber that I am only in the 6th grade. So, I don't obviously have years of experience.

Also, in case you are wondering the reason why I'm not deleting this story, it's because it was my first story.

Ok, so, let me know what you guys think of me editing the story, and if you think I should or not.

~ Megarooni

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