- use commas before the last quotation mark when you're using dialogue tags (she said, he said)."We use commas instead of periods when we write dialogue," she said, a grin on her face.
Exceptions to this are exclamations(!) and questions(?).
"What about questions, miss?" he asked, remembering to keep the word after the dialogue in small letters.
"Yes! I need help with those!" another girl said, paying close attention.
- use periods instead of commas when you want to follow the dialogue with an action rather than a dialogue tag.
"Well, if you had been paying attention, you would've known by now." The boy shifted in his seat, his snide remark earning a glare.
- using a comma is appropriate if there's an action in the middle of a sentence
"Don't forget," she stopped pacing the room, "that we have to be polite when discussing the ins and outs of grammar."
- you can also add a period between two separate lines
"That's true." A man glanced at the others. "We must be civil in teaching; education isn't a competition."
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