**Cover is NOT by me**
Send me your oc's and I will critique them to the best of my ability. Also, I will be BRUTALLY honest, so if you can't take my honest critique then don't read this book.
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Okay, Blitz is pretty cool, weakness and strengths are even! Thank god! But clumsyness isn't really a weakness, so that could use a little work. All around this oc is pretty good but ORANGE AND BLUE MAGIC?? I just feel that SCREAMS Sans and Papyrus. It's just overused is all. And the backstory is a little vague. Did Alphys just kidnap this child and experiment on her? Did Blitz allow Alphys to experiment on her? Going into further detail will clear up any random and crazy questions.
Marysue rating...
4/10
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