Hey all, its Chase. This is my first review and Im reviewing a book for deernut- and I really hope you like it.
Title Relevancy: (4.5/5) Title: Tired Girls Okay, I understand the title and I absolutely believe it matches what you wanted the story to be. But the story follows one girl. And the other reason will be addessed later.
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Cover Relevency/Neatness: (5/5) I love it! Its really clean, cute and fits the story. Maybe adjust the title's text someway to make it a bit more noticeable.
Grammar/Spelling: (10/10) The hard thing with books that use all lower cases and fancy spots to bold their words is you dont know if its a mistake or meant to be there. But I didnt see any errors, besides a coma in chapter one.
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Story Summary: (10/10) It's really good. You did a good job of saying alot without saying much.
Chapter Consistency: (9/10) Most chapters are about the same length. Sometimes they're shorter than the others. I didn't see any chapters that were extremely out of the norm. In my opinion, maybe you should've made chapters a bit longer, and I'll say why in the plot spot.
Paragraph Skills: (9/10) Sometimes the paragraph was really long compared to the others, but besides that you did (surprise, surprise) really good.
Description Skills: (8/10) You have amazing description... except for the about the people. This may be your intention, but Im just going off what I think. I can't truly connect or picture her in my head.
Plot: (14/15) The plot is really good. I feel like maybe you should've made your chapters longer because it takes a while to get to her truly being sad. I feel like the story is well done, but we're waiting to get to what we came for.
Reviewers Score: (9/10) I think you did a really good job. I feel like maybe editing, some minor tweaks, but thats my opinion. I really liked it!
Overall Score: (13/15) I dont have a lot to say, more than editing would definitely help the book become even better than it already is. Good job!
Overall: 91.5
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Hey guys! This review was for the book Tired Girls by deernut- I really hope you didn't think I was too mean, because I would never want you to think that. I really appreciate you coming to WeDontKnowNo for your review :)
