Hey all! Chase here reviewing Sleep Paralysis by disastersinwriting. I hope you enjoy, and if you have a book you want reviewed, sign up!!
Title Relevancy: (5/5) Title: Sleep Paralysis The title fits perfectly with what your story is about.
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Cover Relevancy/Neatness: (3.5/5) Okay, your cover is really well done. Its super neat and I love how it is built. The only thing that I dont love is the pictures. They dont exactly match your story.
Grammar/Spelling: (10/10) I didn't see any mistakes, really.
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Story Summary: (9/10) Your summary is really intriguing and well written. I feel like it kinda could steer some people to think something different, but thats probably just me. Very well done!
Chapter Consistency: (9/10) Most of your chapters are around the same length, sometimes however, a chapter can be abnormally short compared to the others.
Plot: (15/15) I fell in love with your plot. Its so original! Ive never heared of spotted another book that as like yours.
Paragraph Skills: (10/10) I think you did a good job.
Description Skills (9.5/10) Your description and attention to detail is incredible. My only critique is maybe, a little less. Sometimes spots can get boring and dragged out. But orherwise, nailed it.
Reviewers Score: (9/10) Your book is so extremely well done:)
Overall Score: (14/15) Just minor editing. A few itty bitty things. You should be super proud of your book.
Overall... 94/100
Hey all! I hope that disastersinwriting finds her review helpful and not mean. I really truly loved your book, it was splended.
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