The Raid

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Hello I'm Rafayela Nyx Njókkr this is my first story so try not to be too harsh in your reviews, and please excuse my grammar. Also a little warning i'm going to just jump into my story (please help me out by giving tips on a better way to have started this story)I hope you enjoy my story.

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Hiccup: [Sarcastically] Heh. Oh, yeah! Yes! I can't wait. I am so... [Scene cuts to at the cove] Hiccup: ...LEAVING! We're leaving. Let's pack up. Looks like you and me are taking a little vacation, forever. Ah, man... When suddenly he was taken by a white light that over took Berk and transported the Villagers and Hiccup all to a large room; covered in red satin curtains and small pale white lights, all around the room with a black and white tile ceiling with white inserted lights, black carpeting filled to the brim with an array of relatively large black chairs only noticeable difference being their varying sizes. All of the Vikings seem to have been placed in a pile at the back of the room excluding Hiccup. Who was standing a safe distance away taking in his surroundings and watching as the villagers untangled themselves from each other teens first then the elderly, Stoick, and Gobber, last the rest of the villagers while yelling about the demon who brought them here better show themselves followed by unintelligible threats to their host. Once all of the villagers got on their feet Stoick the chief decided to take charge yelling into the room " Listen here demon, I am Stoick the vast, chief of berk. Show yourself and state why you've brought us here." Then Hiccup said " Father I don't think that's a good idea this person has unknown powers to us and threatening them could be a bad idea." Gobber: " You might be right. That's my apprentice sharp as an axe." Hiccup: " Thanks Gobber ."

Then another white light passed through the room a petite girl with a top heavy figure was left in its wake about 5'6 long black hair with purple, red, and white highlights and she had gray eyes with long pupils and an eyebrow piercing as well as a middle bottom lip piercing (vertical labret). She was wearing black bell bottomed jeans with a black short sleeved shirt that said " My mind and body are the best weapon. For they're more lethal than any weapon you may have in both Strength and Knowledge." This girl then said " Welcome to my theater Vikings of berk it is nice too finally meet you all. Oh and Hiccup good observation that was pretty smart conclusion to come to props. So any who let's get this show on the road everyone on these seats in front of their are your names please go and sit in your designated seats." Stoick: " Wait! We won't sit till you explain why we're here." Rafayela: " Sit and I will explain everything deal?" " Deal." Right when those words left Stoick's mouth all the villagers even the twins went to find their seats with no issues. Rafayela: OK, so I broug.." Ruffnut/Tuffnut: " Hey why's" "Hiccup sitting alone in the front" "and not with us teens like all of the villages" " teens" " he just sitting in front of " " us and the chief and gobber" Rafayela: " He's sitting there because I thought it was a good place for him. Now I brought you all here today to watch a film on the future of your village and how it prospers in the near future. As safety for some people from some people I have taken your weapons you will get them back when the movie is over you will get your weapons back. This movie will show you some of your past, present, and future. As you all have probably notice half of the room is empty I am going to have some other guest here. There is a barrier here protecting them from you and you from them so don't Freak out when I bring them here." Then another white light passed through the room and all of the dragons from the nest and toothless appear on the other end. Predictably all the vikings and dragons go to attack each other or protect their own bar toothless and Hiccup of course. After they realized they can't attack each other they all look over at Rafayela to yell at her and demand answers but she interrupted Rafayela: "So don't attack each other or there will be severe consequences so enjoy the film be good." Then she left in another white light that went through the room and she was gone.

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That's my first chapter. I will change the layout of the speaking outside the movie in later chapters to be more separated and easier to follow. I'll put them on different lines in my story. Also I was thinking give me some feedback on whether or not I should have my character Rafayela be involved with the characters or just when absolutely necessary like big plot points and the end of the fic or just act as if she's one of my characters. Thanks in advance for any and all feedback you give me.

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