Sleeping Pill and Other Short Narratives

The Subway Ride

I had finished my courses for the day, and I entered the subway, and it was bustling with action, but I still felt a chill inside myself. If I could have gone back in time, I would have left, and waited for a taxi. There was a man playing a guitar, and we was playing the same tune over, and over. I dropped a dollar in his hat, but I then noticed he had pitch black eyes, and he just suddenly melted. It was then too late as the subway car had just arrived. I entered, but there were not many people. As the announcements came on about what stop was next and in the background, there was a screaming, a screaming of a young girl. The person heard it and told us that it was still okay, but I knew at that point, something was wrong, because the person heard it. Soon, the train started, and the tunnel was well lit and in the middle of it, the train stopped, and all the lights came off, except for the few lights in the subway.

This is round two of the contest. Seventeen people left. This was from the same prompt as the prompt of The Ride is based off of. Voting is tommorrow. I really hope I make it to the third round. So guys, read and enjoy!

I made it! Now I'm in the top eight.