forgotten love
by dearharold
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First of all, the plot is very cliche but at the same time original and I like that. A girl who loses her memory isn't something new, right? But you made it new and that's what catches my interest. I think it's written very well. Your book cover is great and I love the font lol.
I'd like to make some suggestions, though.
- Don't use periods if it isn't a complete sentence.
- Go over your text before puplishing it to prevent grammar mistakes.
- Remember the difference between you're and your.
Also, the story starts off with a dialogue between two people. I suggest you to write out who's talking or atleast a few hints to make it more interresting.
Other than that, I think the story is great and I'm glad you requested it. Just keep up with the writing and you'll go far!
Rate: ☺☺☺
- M x
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