farhampton ✑ ashtonnirwin

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farhampton

by ashtonnirwin

WHAT EVEN ARE YOU LIKE SERIOUSLY CAN I HAVE YOUR BIO AND BACKGROUND PLZ 

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Let me just start off by saying that your cover is absolutely perfect and very well done. I really like the plot and you're writing is nice. The title is unique compared to the basic titles authors would normally choose for this kind of story. Also, I really like the fact that you put related quotes at the start of every chapter. 

The only thing I would change is the summary which goes; 

They're perfectly fine. But fate always messes it up.

and I would change it to something more reflecting to the story, that will leave the reader in need of some answers. 

 Rate: ☺☺☺☺

Other than that, it's just short and perfect and I love it. Very well done! 

- M x 

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⏰ Last updated: Mar 16, 2014 ⏰

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