only an echo
by harrystyleshipster
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did this arrive from fucking heaven on a marshmallow cloud bc bEAUTIFUL PIECE OF ART
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All I can say about this story is perfection. I started reading the first chapter and it really got to me. I've been very lazy, lately, and haven't really had the urge to read more than one chapter but this was addicting. The way you reflected Harry's personality is just wow. I'm so tired of the "dark" Harry and this just got even more better when you made him more like his real self. It's easier to picture him in a story when it's based on his real personality. Also, I love how you included all five of them but in very different characters and Louis fitted so well as her (bisexual) friend.
I absolutely adore Everly and her attitude. Her relationship with Louis, Eric and Tommy is beyond perfect. I'm jelous lol. The whole plot is just lovely and the story is basically everything I've ever wanted. It's very cliche, yes, but at the same time so realistic. I can totally picture this happening and if I get to do this, I would actually call this some kind of a new version of TFIOS minus the sadness and anxiety. It's the same kind of humor and you can really feel the connection between them.
I couldn't find any grammar mistakes because I was too busy fangirling (do people even use that word anymore?) over Harry's skinny jeans and interest in 90's bands but since everything is amazingly written, I'm pretty sure it's free from errors.
Comments:
I literally loved every single dialogue but this one made me laugh.
❝"Oh, Harry," a boy with a brown quiff smiles, holding out his hand. "I'm Liam. Nice to finally have a name with a face,"
"Everly's talked about me?" Harry asks, a smile bubbling up on his lips along with butterflies in his stomach.
"Nope," Eric says, the smile never falling from his lips. "In fact, she denied your existence."
Harry's heart falls to his stomach.
"Oh," he pouts.❞
Rate: ☺☺☺☺☺
Thanks for coming up with this amazing idea and I need you to update so badly ;'(( #heverly
- M x
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Fanfic❝i guess the title says the most of it, but i suggest you to press the button if you want to find out the rest.❞ my meaningless ranting and rambling about different kind of books that you should totally check out.
