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12 people were killed in the last month. Of those killed one of them was the most powerful man in America, Ezekiel Valentine. His death came as a surprise causing the police to be in an uproar. As for years, they could never prove his connection to illegal activities. So the big question was how???

Nix Grace had just started her consultation career and her first case was to figure out what had happened to these 12 dead people. But there was a catch she has to work with a senior detective, Aron Desmos, or as he goes by Desmos. Desmos is arrogant but charming when he wants to be. Able to persuade his way through anything.

These are small previews on a story I'm planning on writing. I just wanna see if anyone would be interested in it.

...Taking a sip of my ice coffee, I relax back into the comfort of my chair, while reading a new horror series I've just discovered. I had just graduated a few months back and was still searching for a job. You see I had spent the last 4 years of my life dedicated to a major in criminal justice. It's a wonder all that hassle for a piece of paper that stated you should be capable of performing the job adequately, but then you need experience.

I never really understood it, but I guess I really just joined university because society requires you to have a degree. Having a Bachelor was no longer an accomplishment as it had become a common thing now. Although I guess I'm one of the lucky few that don't have to worry about the fees. As you see I live in Australia. For those of us who hold an Australian citizenship the government pays for your tuition, as long as its for a degree below Masters. Although you do end up having to pay to of for the rest of your working life. Notice I said working, cause if you are unemployed no payment is withdrawn. Looking at it you see why I am of the few lucky, that don't have to stress as much...

...Running is always a pain, like come on how do people willingly torture themselves to sprint distances willingly. Returning back to the current issue of outrunning an angry shopkeeper, I was seriously hating madly upon Desmos, how does a person run that fast. Panting heavily he made a sharp turn into a narrow path in between the houses that lead to a park. For once he actually made an intelligent choice. This park isn't like those classic ones where it's aren't of trees except for those few used as shades for benches. It was covered in bushes and trees that stretched for miles. Desmos ran towards a tree line that had shrubs and bushes covering the floor. I ran after him and crouched down low. Not even a few seconds later the shopkeeper came running out of the small path and stopped for a second to search for us, as his gaze approached our hiding spot I ducked back down and stayed there for a good minute or so, in hopes of him taking off into the opposite path. I appeared back up and to our luck he did.

Falling onto my back I let out a breath that I didn't know I was holding in. Laughing out of hysteria of being almost caught, caused for Desmos to appear. He gave me a look questioning my madness then walked away...

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