WattyWarriors Book of Reviews

emberblazeofwindclan: Blossom

Introduction:

Title: Blossom

Reviewer: Chrome (Riddivalion)

Author: emberblazeofwindclan

Book Summary/Description:

-Thirty two parts, with long chapters (A novel sized book)

-Robinpaw is a member of FloraClan, not your typical Clan. There are certain rules and traditions in place that supposedly help the Clan, but over time Robinpaw begins to question them. However, in FloraClan, thinking that way is dangerous... With the Clan shrouded in mystery, there's no way of knowing if you're safe.

Admin(s) Personal Review:

Okay. Whew.

So, this book is good. Really good. It was a book I was planning on reading before I began this review, and I'm glad that I'm doing it now. There are so many good things about the book, that you can't just explain, you'd have to read to really understand. The way information is withheld throughout the entire book had me excited when anything new was brought up. FloraClan is so mysterious.

"Eye-popping" Characteristics:

-Unique Naming System: The prefixes and suffixes change depending on whether or not a cat is a kit, an apprentice, or a warrior.

Ratings (all out of 10, add up to 100 for final score):

- Character and Character Development (Are characters vivid and well-developed? Do they make notable progression throughout the story?) : 10/10

- Plot (Is it unique? Is it interesting? Does it make sense?) : 10/10

- Clarity (Is the story able to be read easily? Does it make sense?) : 8/10

- Organization (Is it organized well? Do the paragraphs flow easily? Is time in the book itself not rushed forward i.e. writer doesn't skip moons too often) : 9/10

- Grammar (Self-explanatory. Mistakes in spelling/punctuation are rare, common, etc) : 4/10

- Variety (Are the words and sentence structure varied? Do they flow well? Is the story well-articulated?) : 9/10

- Interesting-ness (Do you maintain interest throughout the story?) : 10/10

- Detail (Is the setting vivid? Is the story very descriptive and detailed? Can you imagine it in your mind?) : 10/10

- Emotion/Thought (Does the story make you emotional at times? Does it invoke thought? Feelings of excitement or sadness?) : 10/10

- Appeal (How does the cover look? Does the short book description draw readers in? Is the book and writing itself appealing?) : 9/10

Final Rating: 90/100

(90+ is excellent, one of the best warriors fanfictions on Wattpad)

(80+ is good, minor mistakes/problems, but still very good quality.)

(70+ is average, moderate number of mistakes/problems, but enjoyable overall)

(60+ is poor, high number of mistakes/problem, may be interesting to some)

(50 or below, significant number of mistakes/problems, not enjoyable)

Why you recommend reading/avoiding the fanfiction:

I recommend reading Blossom. There's the fact that it's based on Warriors, yet is incredibly unique. FloraClan works in such a strange way, and most of the ideas in this book are ones that I've never seen before.

As with content creators on YouTube, the book prefers quality over quantity, and the updates were infrequent. We don't have to wait for updates now, but the fact that the book had effort put into it and took time to produce makes it more enjoyable.

The book also did a great job with emotion. At the beginning, I was just reading it, but over time I started to feel more towards the characters. I unexpectedly began two ships, hated characters, felt sad, horrified, angry, etc. There were also many things left for the reader to infer, and the questions at the end in the author's notes were thought-provoking.

There were plenty of spelling errors and grammatical errors, the downside to the book for me. I could see past that however since the book was so good. Go check it out!