Hi guys, thanks for reading my very short, short story. This is the first 'book' I have ever EVER written, so I know there was a lot of mistakes and I know that I could have a made it a lot more interesting, but I hope you liked it.
I would really really like to improve my writing, so please give me honest feed back and tips- I would really appreciate it.
If you liked this book and want to read more, I might write a sequel, but it's up to what you guys think about the first part 'Exist or exit?'
If I do make a sequel, there will be a lot more going on and my style of writing will hopefully be improved.
But please tell me what you think, good or bad.
Thanks for reading!
Cyvonne Nel
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Exist or exit?
Short StorySeventeen year old, Iolanthe 'Violet' Holmes is a student at North Ridge High School. She's confused about who she truly is and about what she wants to do in the future. Slowly, but surely she finds herself but yet there's more to discover. How doe...
