*Goodbye (By: grrlything)*
I've been doing suprise book reviews! This one is for yours. (By yours I mean your book).
Okay, So being the first person to read the first ever book/series you are doing made me feel like the luckiest person ever and being able to be a part of the theme about it is just a blessing. Goodbye, is a really strong and powerful book about love and compassion, about knowing when to stop loving someone or when to love someone, if it's the right way to go or just completely wrong. It shows us that sometimes you have to take the risk and let go. That's what I think that your book is about.
Seeing that you haven't written much of it or atleast haven't posted all of it, I have a few suggestions you can take, Check the errors, and re-check, And maybe make the story more eye-catching like leave a hook so that on the very first word or paragraph on your story the readers just can't stop reading or can't wait until you update! Your cover is great though. *wink*
Overall, Goodbye needs a little bit more liveliness. And as for your writing skills? It's good, *inserts smiley face*
I love you!
Stay Weird, Stay Crazy, Stay YOU! \(^.^)/
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