Too Late (By: littlebunnyrabbit)

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Type of Review: Harsh

Well, first and foremost. You chose harsh, I am so touched by your bravery. To be honest the story gets me in a bit of a slack. I think it needs to be longer. And don't get me wrong I loved the theme of it, all this love thing and chances are for Harry is that he is 'Too Late' to get it right with Katy.

About your cover, awesome! It is wonderful but I suggest using a darker colored backdrop or using a darker colored font.

But, overall I am giving this a thumbs up since I read 3 chappies oh and dont worry it wont make the payment differ since you only paid for two, the plus one I read is on me.

Rate:

[x] 90 - 100

[ ] 75 - 89

[ ] 74 below

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Reads: 22

Summary:

Katy loves Harry. They've been together for months. But then she finds out the horrible truth that Harry used her. She's had enough of his apologies and his begging, so she moves away from him. She settles down there, and starts fresh. But what does starting fresh mean to Katy?

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