Okay I don't wanna be weird and all but I picked this because it caught my eye the most, I mean the title is everything! I read it too and it's good. It had a good turn, But I have a few bit of suggestions.
You're cover, It needs a new one I mean it's good but not enough. (Am I being strict? Sorry.. If I am) and the story needs more details, like it needs to be longer. Don't get me wrong I like it! But it just that if someone reads it and its THAT short then they would be incomplete, like they would maybe want the story to last. If you get what I'm saying.
Hmm. I hope I'm not being so strict. Honestly, you have way more readers than me and idek, Gahh. And uhm I really hope I didn't offend you on what I have been saying, You can either take them or ignore them, either one is fine (Like really c:) Okay.. Well yeah that's it! I love you! <3
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