Book Reviews [CLOSED]

Pulled Into The Darkness (By: _That_Girl_____)

*Pulled Into The Darkness (By: _That_Girl_____)*

 This is actually a suprise book review, Bet you didn't expect this one! Am I right? I just really wanted to be able to tell you how proud I am! Like OMG! Girl.. You have a talent! I just.. I don't even know what to say. This book/series is absolutely fascinating to me. I remember when you were barely starting to write this and you even let me be the first one to read, (I feel blessed because of that) And now looking at the reads I see that people really LOVE the story as much as I do. And yes I have been reading a few chappies and so.. *wink wink* on that.

 If I can suggest anything I think that would be, Use something to bring your story to life, like specify things (bold or oblique the quotations) when the characters are speaking so readers would be more-- Imaginative, (that's the word I was looking for), So they can actually tell and at the same time feel what the characters in your story are feeling or saying, and doing. Do I make sense here? I don't know. It's just a small advice. I think it's a bit of a small itty bitty help. 

 Overall though I think that you'd be a great writer, Keep writing! You're already on the right path. If this is for fun or to pass time then.. Do it with all your heart! Just never stop ok?

 I love you!

Stay Weird, Stay Crazy, Stay YOU! \(^.^)/

(c)2014.Oznapitsbizzle.ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.