I woke up in a pure white room and I look around. I noticed that the room went on as far as I could see. The only thing that was there was a chair with a man in it. The man had a grey shirt on with grey pants both of them were ripped. He also had long black hair that was dirty like he had been there a while. I walked up to him and said “um excuse me do you know where we are?” The man looked up and one of his eyes were missing. He looked like a man without hope. “You my boy are in the room of the damned. The place where you go when you have committed sins.” “Well why am I here then?” “Because I’m a sinner. And you are my son.” When he said that I knew he wasn’t lying “Dad. Mom said you went away but you were alive, what happened?” “Well I committed a taboo.” “What was the taboo?” “I cannot say.” "Ok but why did you leave? Why didn't you stay with mom?" "Because when you were born i had commited the taboo and cursed your soul. I made a deal with the Devil himslef to let you live until you were in highschool in exchange for my soul. But god had already damned you and i knew if you ever ended up hear i would help you get out." “How do I get out of here?” “There is one way out but you have to trust me.” “I trust you” “then let’s go” we walked over to one spot in the floor. “Ok here we are” my father said. “What do I do?” I asked “the way can only be opened by a act of kindness from a damned soul” “what does that mean?” “Nothing” he said. “Just jump through when I say.” He got down to the floor put his hands onto the floor and when he did this his hands went into the floor and he opened a door way that looked like a tunnel with a light at the end. “You go through the tunnel to that light and you will be out of the room of the damned.” My father said. “Then what?” I asked “then you survive” he said. I lowered myself into the hole “wait” I said what about you. He didn’t answer but handed me a wrist bracer with a tiny hole in the top. “What’s this” I asked “a gift before I am wiped out of existents. And im sorry i wasnt with you as a child” “What do you mean?” I asked “it means a act of kindness by a damned soul.” I then realized the cold truth, that he meant he was going to kill himself for me. Then dropped me and while I was falling a drop of water hit my face and I saw my father was crying then he vanished “DAD NOOOO” I yelled up but it was to late and I turned to look at the light but it wasn’t day light it was worse than being dead. It was the light of the fires of hell.
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The Devil hates my soul
AdventureThe "The Devil hates my soul" is about me in high school with my two best friends in real life Brett.R and Scotty.H. In the story during class just my teacher starts acting weird and then attacks me. My teacher then starts talking about how my soul...