2: "No punctuation?!"

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This might be an overstatement? Just... look. Like this:

Insert name here woke up to the sound of her alarm blaring and got up for school

"Crap I'm late" She yelled seeing that her alarm had been ringing for 10 minutes

"Insert name here get up right now I'm not taking you to school" said her mother who was finished making breakfast downstairs

...And so on. One time I asked in the comments why there was no punctuation. Here were my exact words:

"Why is there no punctuation?"

I liked the book fully. It was a good read. But I stopped reading it in the third chapter when the author responded with:

"Because I think it looks messy if you don't like it then don't read it craisin"

Again, no punctuation...

Do you guys know what a craisin is? It's like a raisin, but a cranberry. A sun-dried cranberry.

I don't think it was much of an insult but... did you have to say it? You could have just said "I think it looks messy." Which will bring us to our next chapter, actually.

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