Power and Revenge

I felt the power sore through me as the change began. I felt stronger than ever before as if the world was in my hands and I could do anything with it.

My sixteenth birthday meant a lot to me because it was the day I finally matured. I’d been living the child’s life for 15 years, being tossed around and told what to do but no more. Tonight was the night I would change into something more.

Midnight had stuck on my birthday and it started. I was alone with no one around to see what would happen to me. My light brown hair started going darker until it turned black. My soft blue eyes turned into an icy, cold and hard blue. I felt my stomach become flatter, my thighs slimmer and I grew slightly taller. My skin turned paler and overall I had a very curved body.

My body started tingling and a thrilling sensation ran up my spine. I stood there with my arms at my side and head titled up taking in all the changes and power I was getting.

After what felt like minutes but ended up being an hour I had completely transformed into something new. I giggled to myself slightly at the thought of having more power and overruling everyone in the world.

I looked down at my right hand. I looked at it as if it was brilliant and I had never seen anything like it. I then looked to my right and saw a small tree, no taller than a few meters. I smirked and looked back at my hand quickly before pushing my hand towards the tree. The small thing burst into icy blue flames before quickly disappearing.

I giggled again in delight at watching the tree burn and disappear. I decided to test more of my powers before I left the secret place I was in. I looked at the dark, calm night sky. I shot my arms in the air with my palms and fingers pointing upwards. There was a huge crack of thunder and dark, black clouds covered the skies in seconds. Then there was lighting and more thunder as it started to rain.

The cool water made me feel alive as it dripped down on my face. I smiled happily as I thought that this was a new beginning for me. I could finally be treated properly and destroy anyone I wanted.

I was now the most powerful witch since the 1700s and I was here for revenge.

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This is a story I entered in a writing competition and I would really like to know what you honestly think of it. Thank you! I'll set a goal for this as well as when that goal is reached, I will ask if you would like me to make this into a real story. Ok so the goal will be 150 reads, 35 comments and 60 votes. Thanks again! xx