My Old Stories

Merry Christmas

Yeah, yeah: this is a little early, but I just HAD to post this. This one actually isn't too bad, and I'm still just a little proud of it. Here it is! Sit back and relax, because this is a long one! I will be reacting to this one, I enjoy doing that (I found that out after reading Starkit's Prophecy)

One Christmas evening Tareisa (Teresa) was spending time with her family.
Well, that's kind of redundant, considering there is only one Christmas evening in the year anyway!

Then they herd a anonsment on tellaviston. They said that Santa was sick he had a very bad case of the snifles.
Santa is dropping out because he has allergies? You travel around the world every year and work hard in your workshop, and you're letting some boogers keep you from traveling around the world?

Tarersa got worried. "Can I go outside"? asked Tareisa. "yes you may", said her Grandma. So Tareisa went outside first she got out some supplies to make a sliegh of her own, because she wanted to help Santa.
Wow, very audacious!

Anyways she loves to give things to people and because it was nice too. her sliegh was perfect. Then she got some animals who could fly.
So...birds?

Then she went to Santas workshop. Santa was suprised Taresa was taking his place.
He's acting like he doesn't have a choice!

Also he said she could boro his reindeer.
Thanks, said Tareisa. Then Santa gave her all the presents.
If I were Teresa I would just take them all for myself😂

Tareisa diecided she would find some of her friends to help her, because giving out lots and lots of presents is hard work.
she got three of her friends Maddy, adasen, and Lenda. When they saw Santa's sleigh it was as shiny as a dimond. They got on and they got to work. The reindeer were pretty fast. Santa was feeling better that the girls were helping them. First they stoped at a little boy's house the boy was awake.
Are they going to scare him?

so we went to that house first. The house was brick and small. They went on the roof and Tareisa went down the chiminey she went down in the boys room. "Hello I'm Tareisa." The boy looked at her smiling, "Hello I'm Zack."
Wow, that's a calm reaction for someone who's house has just been broken into

Hello Zack," said Tareisa "it seems like you can't sleep is there anything wrong"? "I can't sleep because I will not sleep until Santa gets here." "Well I'm taking Santa's place.", said Tareisa. "So I geuss you can go to sleep right now." so Zack went to sleep. Then Tareisa I went down stairs and put the presents under the Christmas tree. Then ten hours later they were done.
You'd think that Teresa's family would notice that she's gone by now!

Tareisa was happy they were done I They went back to Santa's workshop. Santa was better when the girls got back. "Santa we gave out all of the presents," said Maddy.
So they just left? With no rewards? They didn't try to get ANYTHING out of Santa?

Then they all went home. "Did you have fun?", said Grandma.
Does Grandma actually believe that Teresa was outside playing for ten hours??

She I was as pretty as a Christmas tree. Then Grandma got out a pretty present it was as shiny as Rudolph's nose. It was for Tareisa. She opened the present it was a pretty ornament. It was as bright as the sun. "You look as pretty as any other granddather," said her grandma. "Yeah I geuss I am, said Tareisa.
Well gosh, she's full of herself!

So They spend The rest of the Christmas together. The End.

That was it. Now that you've read it you're probably wondering why I was every proud of this. It's definitely not because of the grammar. I guess I just am proud of the basic plot. It would take me a while today to come up with a storyline like this! Anyway, I hope you guys enjoyed!