I'm not saying the name of the book, but 2 people who are going to read this chapter have read this book. ;)
So basically, the book is a deexdell book [sigh]. That's my first problem but I'm not gonna reiterate what I said in my first chapter.
First of all, the entirety of the book was typed with capitalized first letters [Like This The Whole Time] and it used ellipses to separate sentences. No periods, no enters. The whole book was basically a whole sentence.
She didn't even use correct grammar. "I'm make him mines" is not a well formed sentence. Sorry, not sorry.
Also, the excessive use of emojis is cancerous. Okay, one of two emojis is fine, but 50 emojis back to fucking back is ridiculous.
I'm tempted to rewrite one chapter of the book for y'all next chapter to where it's legible. You know what, I don't have anything better to do, I will.
And y'all can't come at me cause if you read any of my books, they are readable and barely have any errors, don't do me.
Y'all ugly, bye.
YOU ARE READING
y'all ugly.
Sonstiges[FANPAGE WATTYS WINNER FOR FUNNIEST BOOK] I'm roasting all of the fanfics I've read about the rap game. y'all niggas crazy.
