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As Yn and Jessica walk down the sidewalk he drop her off at her house. He continued his way to his own house and got a beautiful view of the sun just a few hours away from making disappearing over the horizon. "I just wish mom was here to see this," He said as he thought of his stepmother. His stepmother was diagnosed with fur cancer a month ago. The news hat hit the family hard on the action that it was just all of the sudden after she whent it se the doctor about her fur loss.

It turns out it was the cancers doing. She soon started to loos all her fur and couldn't go outside in the sun anyway and she's always freezing. One night, her skin was as pale as snow and she barely had any energy to even lift her tail. She's still alive and well as can be in the hospital, but for how long that will last is something the doctors can't determine.

As Yn continues to look at this sunset he starts feeling a little home sick too. Though he is home now but this is a different kind of homesick. He wasn't born in old America. Yn contry of birth is the beautiful countryside of South Africa. A land where the term 'redneck' was originally born based on nothing more than ill-prepared British troops caught under the scorching heat of the South African sun. It was a country of many firsts and many wonders. And one of those wonders is the sunsets and sunrises. He can still remember the last sunset he saw before coming to Furmerica. He couldn't see the sun it self. There in South Africa, deep inside the bush (wilderness basically) you don't always need to see it. The darkened trees, lit up sky and reflection in the small lake contained enough of its beauty on their own.

 The darkened trees, lit up sky and reflection in the small lake contained enough of its beauty on their own

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Thinking back to those days are always nostalgic and sad and now isn't the time to be sad. Yn hade to get home and rest for tomorrow. He didn't exactly live far from Jessica and John's house but not nearly close enough that in would seem easier to walk back and forth. But the time he had arrived it was 5:55

An: Quick question guys, I just want to know do you want me to write everything in the narrators POV or switch between the character's POV, or do both the narrator and The character's POV.


Yn POV

As I came home, I saw a scooter parked in my driveway. "I wasn't expecting someone, was I?" I asked myself. I walked up to my front porch and looked under the welcome mat. The emergency key was gone. Whith all the strength stuff goes on I can only speculate. Either Kate found out and is waiting for me inside to kick my ass, or Sam found out where I live and is waiting for me to kick his ass, or someone broke in and is desperate for a early grave.

Shaking my head then burst through the door with my hands up ready for a fist fight. That was until my ears were ringing, and almost starting to bleed thanks to a very high pitch scream. I pleased my hands over my ears and fell to my knees dazed by the scream.

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