Chapter seven part TWO

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Elton's point of view :

Me and Colby sit up front as Corey, Sam, and Lorin have their time.

"Please don't hurt her."

Colby speaks but this time it isn't intimidating, nor scary.

It was a plea.

"I will Colby. But... When were you going to confess?"

"Not sure. But I knew it wouldn't work out. I knew she.... Loved you."

"Heeeey. Love is a strong word."

Then I thought. She said she loved me. But I'll I said was 'shut up. I like you too.'

"You are correct Elton. It is."

That had me thinking all night.

'Love? It doesn't sound too bad. It rolls off my tongue nicely. But it sounds better with her name after it.'

"Colby."

"Hm?"

"Promise me something, will ya?"

"Yeah."

"There will be times where I will leave for stuff, so watch over her if I am busy, Toddy sucks at that so..."

"You didn't have to ask me to. I do it anyway. Elton?"

"What?"

"Is it awkward that I love her for you?"

"A little but its fine."

"Okay."

I didn't lie. It didn't bother me. I was happy that this girl had people who love her.

It was late at night and I was starting to drift away behind the wheel....

Colby was asleep in the passenger seat, and Lorin and the other boys were sleeping together in the cabin.

Before I could open my eyes a dodge pick up truck had swerved in our lane, hitting the front of the vehicle.

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All I recall was the sound of a horn and the smell of exhaust leaking out.

"....Elton! Come on you're okay! Lorin....she needs you... Don't leave us... The ambulance is on the way!"

"El-elton! No... No!"

"Lorin... Calm dow-"

"No Sam! No... Wait... Sam. Where-wheres Colby?!"

".... Oh god..."

"What Corey what?!"

"Colby's stuck in the car! He's alive but stuck!"

"No... I love you both...."

"Veeerjdjsksm... Can..... Krkowwkabb... You... Hdjsjsbwh"

I couldn't grasp to what anyone was saying anymore.

But before I lost conscience

All I remembered saying was,

"Colby... Needs... Watch... Rin...ave.. im.. "

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