So it has been almost 8 or so months since I've touched this story. I originally wrote this story in October 2016, and I don't think it's a good idea to write again because I'm obviously going to have different views on how I should write it now then when I originally wrote this. I'm going to keep it posted, although I will not be publishing any more parts. Hope you guys understand. If you have any comments or concerns, PM me or comment on my message board.