Of all the Kylo fanfictions out there this one has to be one of my favourites. Calia's time with the First Order shows in her characterisation, and the parallels between her and Finn trying to break away from that programming was very well portrayed. Kylo's characterisation was exactly how I imagine it, and his gradual relationship with Calia was realistic and refreshingly distinguishable from the kidnapped-and-fall-in-love arc.
Overall the descriptions were on point, and your character development was amazing. The plot was interesting and easy to follow, if not a little bit heart breaking, and I'm definitely looking forward to any of your works in the future.
