1: @tossers // The Making of a Sextape

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i: Firstly Noelle to start off the title is probably one of the most unique I've seen so far, it goes perfectly within the plot and the whole concept of the story. so that's a 10 / 10 on that one.

ii: Secondly the cover. I have to say is like really creative, fits the title and the plot so well done. I love it how it actually has a video tape on their with Niall Horan and Elicia Marie. The black and white theme and the effects is just cool and amazing! so 10 / 10 on that to hehe.

iii: Thirdly now the description. Very detailed, it reeled me in when I first saw it. Again its really hard to explain how amazingly written the description is so bare with me love. Its not to short but not to long, just how I like my descriptions. you didn't reveal too much and that's how they should be - so 10 / 10 awe am so happy right now. !!

iiii: Fourthly the plot, overall I couldn't believe that you came up with this like, its the first plot that had an actual good twist too it. like the fact that Louis Tomlinson is multi-tasking is just wow. dating Niall and Elicia is just omg. Plus when I read threw it again for the second time, you split the paragraphs fairly. and I can't wait till the next update. LIKE SERIOUSLY AM DYING (not really sorry about the fan girling.) 10 / 10 babes. !!!

Overall Score: I have to give you a 100% the highest you can get on here btw, because I just want to show you that I support you as a writer, respect you. and will always be here as a friend. your books are too good for me to review and I hope this review was to you expectations - first review am really proud of.

Thank you for taking your time to read this I know its long, but I've took time and dedication towards this. BYE !  and I hope you enjoy this gif of Louis Tomlinson just being pure sexy.

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