6: @sodapxp // patient the impatient

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i: Firstly the title. 'patient the impatient' a very unique and original name perhaps? Yes I really think so. I haven't seen any other book with that name so your like on the safe side for the title of your book. but I do have to say it matches the concept of your book and it's description and i love that. so that's a thumbs up for a 10/10 love!

ii: Secondly the cover. too be honest with you that picture of Liam Payne is just probably the most cute and precious thing I've ever seen and am being serious. I like it how you have this pretty doodle writing right next to him it's just awe. also I like the shading and the colours you've used. It's fits per-ect-ly with your plot and that's how it should be darling. So that's a 10/10

iii: Thirdly the description. can i just say that your description is just omf adorable but on the other hand its emotinal in a way. I dont know why but i find it very emotional but its just the words you've used in the description that makes me want to huge you so tight for being an amazing person and writer. also you haven't revealed too much of the plot so yay on that one. so a 10/10 on that one too :D

iiii: Fourthly the plot overall. when i read the first page it quickly reeled me in like seriously, like what the actual fuck. you made my dark brown eyes water and i can't thank you enough. i really needed that. sorry back to the topic. anyways when Liam would get angry of he couldn't control his autism i just thought wow. you have so much passion and dedication to write this i am amazed. believe me i am. especially when Channing and Harry do everything to look out for him and to protect him as well. so girl i think you need another 10/10 haha.

Overall score: I have to say this to everyone i write book reviews to and you. thats i will always support you as a writer and a fan. whenever you want to talk or you just i dont know then am the girl. you don't know how amazing you are and i hope you know that. you have a talented gift that you should always remember okay? good. now your score i think you deserve 100% because you have work so hard lovely.

Thank you for taking your time to read this I know its long, but I've took time and dedication towards this. BYE ! and I hope you enjoy this gif of Liam Payne being the most sweetest boy he can be hehe x

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