7: @_vagabond // Comedy Of Errors

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i: Firstly the title. when i first saw your title i thought it was quite interesting. 'Comedy of Errors' but the good interesting love. I think it's really unique and creative. I don't think anybody has used that title yet so yay for originality haha. so that darling with give you a 10/10

ii: Secondly the cover. too be honest with you I thought the cover looked like an actual published book. it's simple but not too simple. do you know what I mean? haha of course you do! also I think the cover is really cute and just adorable love. the cover looks like it must of took you ages. so a thumbs up for a 10/10

iii: Thirdly the description. its in the middle between short and not too short you know what I mean? of course you do. oh and I liked it how its only telling you about how Zayn is in big trouble with loosing Perrie's engagement ring. in some way I find it hilarious and actually funny how he is in such a mess. so that deserves a 10/10

iiii: Fourthly the plot overall. as I was reading the first chapter I was really reeled in, seriously I was. I thought the plot and the concept of your story is unique and different and I really like that. and what I also liked about your story was that its not like the other fan fictions. and I just wanted to say that you are a talented writer. so that also gets you a 10/10

Overall score: I can't say anything else apart from that I will always support you as a writer, and a fan also person. I just wanted you to make sure of that lovely. you've worked so hard on your books and you I think you need praise too be honest. so 100% FOR YOU SWEETIE AM SO PLEASED !!!!

Thank you for taking your time to read this I know its long, but I've took time and dedication towards this. BYE !  and I hope you enjoy this gif of Ashton Irwin and Harry Styles dancing and giving us a heart attack with this gif hehe.

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