Please don't laugh at my story .. coz this is just my first try.
And I hope you will like it.
I've finished writing up this yesterday 06/11/10 exactly 00:48 in the morning. And I didn't even bother that I'm going have a quiz in calculus immediately at exactly 9 o'clock! LOL. I just thought that, maybe, I should write something For the watty awards. And here it is the first chapter of my entry.
Hope you all will like it.
Chapter One: Figures
Just as Charice had imagined, her day started to become aggravating from a perfectly delightful sunny-sunshine one when she saw the group of odd-looking men wandering outside their school. She'd been watching them for almost half an hour, and she can tell that they are up to something bad.
"Do you know those men?" She asked her ever loyal friend Justin Bieber.
Ceasing himself from writing something on his notebook, Justin stood from his chair then took a peek on the window, seeing men pacing across the street.
"I don't know. But it's kind of weird to see those people wearing those unusual clothes." He was referring to the odd-looking men Charice had spotted. "I bet they're sweating under those heavy leather jackets." He pressed his face against the glass.
The men both Charice and Justin had just seen were actually wearing black clothes, from hats to shoes. Probably, most people would regard them as a usual person-like the executives- if they don't try to look at them intently. Their faces were covered with rotten bandages and they were limping, which Charice suspected to be odd even for their place.
This was the first time she saw those men.
"Look what that one's doing." She gestured, pointing to one of the odd looking man who was approaching a teenage boy who seems to be waiting for a bus.
Charice and Justin's eyes popped with the surprise brought by the next happenings!
The man clutched the boy's hands. The boy started to try freeing himself from the stranger's grip but he couldn't for the man behind those unusual clothes and rotten bandages was a living corpse. He could smell the nauseating odor of its decaying flesh.
Facing the stranger who was trying to capture him and taking away the bandages through his teeth, the boy caught a sight of the most frightening display of its features. One of the eyes was missing, leaving its socket rooted by squirming worms. The nose weren't there but a gaping hole was dug. Its skin was awfully rotten and the sagging flesh stuck on its jaws was engrossing.
The boy spat and started crying for some help.
Charice and Justine was stunned. They couldn't believe what they've just seen. Charice, just like Justin, pressed her face against the glass to witness.
The boy was withdrawing himself from the terrifying corpse. He crazily shifted his body from side to side, and then the man took a piece of cloth on his right back pocket which looked like a handkerchief but dyed by shimmering silver. He slapped it into the face of the boy-who was momentarily frenzied but now frightened of what might happen to him. After the surface of the cloth draped the full of his face, the boy turned into a mist and then disappeared.
"Unbelievable.", Charice muttered while staring at scene.
Justin Bieber never seen it also before and he was scared. He held his best friend's hands then stared at her. But Charice didn't look back at him. She was still watching concentratedly through the window, her face turned appalled.
"Look at that Jus, they're everywhere!" She exclaimed.
Justin shifted his gaze back to the scene, and then there he saw that there were numerous of those ghastly-looking men. They were scattered on everywhere doing the same things to the residents.
Screams fluttered in the still morning air like it was hard to know who were the ones who needed the help. It seems like every person on the streets needed it-both Charice and Justin thought. Men and women, children and the old ones were running all over the place. They don't know what to do! Caused by the morbidity that they're feeling, they just ran and ran and shrieked.
Avoiding moving around those menacing figures, some of them hid inside the buildings. But it didn't stop the terrifying figures from entering the premises. They crashed the doors, windows and walls just to get in to their victims. They didn't have any mercy.
The residents tried to fight back but they couldn't because the figures weren't hurt even when they were hit by their weapons. They tried to knock them with a sledge hammer on the head and furiously slash their throats by a butcher knife but still it doesn't work on them. They unceasingly kept on coming, doing the same routine.
One of the menacing figures caught the sight of Charice and Justin. He stared at them, without even blinking for a couple of minutes. Charice saw this man. She also stared at him, petrified. Curious, the man paced forward to the entrance of the school where there was no one was sighted -for the guards who remained close to that site were already seized. And the gate left opened.
The figure walked in the grounds of the school, followed by his fellow freaks. They were invading the school!
Charice turned to Justin and said. "We have to go! We're in danger." Her voice was uneven. She was breathing so fast. Her eyes were showing no hint of serenity. She shook Justin who seemed to be scared stiff by what he'd seen.
"Jus, we need to go! We have to hide!" Grasping his shoulders, she shook him again.
Justin came out from his stupor. And soon realizes that they were in a serious situation.
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