Mais quiet friend (ghost hunt FF) very very slow updates

Chapter 1

P.s. I wont be here this week cuz im goin out east. This is big for me cuz i live in the north.
Enjoy ^_^
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Mai's pov

"The police made her go down the dark hallway to the bathroom to see if she could hear the voice again" i said in a creepy voice "she did what she was told and the voice said "whould u like to be covered in a red coat" she answered "yes" and then "AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH" the police barged in and saw the girl covered in blood like she was wearing a red coat that was draped over her" i finished. "Mai u know we dont like it when you use that voice" michiru said. it was like any other time, telling ghost stories after school. When all the lights are out and the last light is on,theres another person in the room. "K, michiru its your turn" i say. The other person is supposedly a ghost.
"K, this is about the old school house" michiru says. " you mean that creepy old building down the street that is collapsing ?" keiko asks. "Yeah, but its not collapsing, it was being demolished when the workers suddenly quit cuz it was cursed, some people have died at the old school house, supposedly a school teacher who has committed suicide,so someone decided to build a new school and tear down the old one, but than, the demolition ended that day, but they started a new one for a museum but a truck driver lost control and killed some kids outside campus, i heard one of this by a upperclassmen that was walking past the old school and saw someone" michiru finishes.
"K" i say

"1

2

3"we say

"4" someone says

"... AAAAAAAAAAAA" we screamed

The lights flickered on

Shadows pov
I heard them say 1,2,3 and some stranger saying 4 and screaming.
"Its the ghost, its come here to murder us" said michiru
I stood up and watched
"Oh please tell us it was you just now?" michiru asked
They sigh in relief
"I was sure it was the ghost" keiko says.
" sorry I didn't expect anyone to be here" the stranger says
I walk up to them
"Ah, shadow I forgot you were here!" Mai exclaimed
"I...was watching from afar, sorry" i said slowly
The stranger continues "i heard voices and i couldnt help myself" he smiles and all the girls blushed except mai and i.
"Oh no its totally fine" keiko says
"So what year are u?" she asks
"Im 17 this year" he answers
"Well we were just telling ghost stories" keiko pointed out
"I wasnt" i intervened
"Well maybe i should join next time" he says.
'Hm, interesting, why would a stranger want to do that?' I thought
"Do u mean u like telling ghost stories too?" Keiko asks
"Yeah" he nods
Keiko and michiru giggle
"You seem like a really cool guy, whats your name?" Michiru asks
"Kazuya" kazuya says
"Ok kazuya, why are you here?" Mai asks rudely
"There are some things i need to tale care of" kazuya says walking to the teachers desk
'I wonder how toby and midnight are doing at home?' I thought bored about the conversation but still listened.
"What are you waiting for?" Mai says
The girls follow him asking if he needs help.
"No thanks, but i would like to join you next time your telling ghost stories" kazuya says
"Really?" Keiko asks
"Well your welcomed anytime" michiru says
"How about tomorrow after school?..."i ask trying to make the conversation faster so we can leave and go home even when i can but, i wanna wait for mai.
He looks at me and says with a smile "ok, where?"
"Here..." I answered quietly
'Go. Faster' I thought annoyed

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Time skip
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"Ugh, tired" i exhaustively say towards mai
'Im glad its friday' i thought relieved
" but its such good weather, im glad we woke up early!" Mai said
"More like you forced me up" I mumbled
"And we got the cherry blossoms to our selves" mai points out
Mai looks at the school unsure
I walk inside not touching anything, when i walked in i saw a camera 'a. Camera' i thought confused
I stayed at the door not going in incase something went wrong but mai saw the camera and walked right in...
"Idiot" i said face palming
"Whats a camera doing here?" Mai mumbles
"Mai dont touch that just incase" i said loud enough so she can hear
"But what is it doing here?" mai asks
Mai went to touch it
"Mai-" i got caught off
"Hey! Dont touch that!" A guy yells, Mai gasps in shock and moves back and hits a shelf
"Im sorry i wont do it" mai says
The shelf falls
"Help!" Mai screams
"Mai" i said loud in worry
The guy ran in and block the shelf so mai didn't get hurt.
"Tall guy!" I said even more worried cuz a shelf hit him and i dont like people hurt.
'Ugh so loud' i said annoyed even though im still worried doesnt mean people can be loud
'Ugh and the camera is obviously under the shelf, great' i thought sarcastically
'Im more worried about the guy though' i thought
Mai dropped to her knees
"Hey mister you ok" mai said
"Whats going on in here?" Kazuya asks
I picked up the shelf
"Mai" I pointed out fixing the shelf
The guy tried to get up, but when he got up a little blood fell.
I paled worried even more
"Lin what just happened, your bleeding" kazuya asks and points out
"Can u stand" kazuya asks
Tall guy grunts
"Omg, im so sorry about this, he just came and it scared me and i-" mai gets cut off "Never mind that is there a doctor close by" kazuya asks
"Theres a doctor just down the street from here" mai tries to grab tall guy but he smacks her hand away "ah" she gasps
"No thanks, you've done enough already as it is" tall guy says
Kazuya helps him up and turns to mai holding tall guys arm and asks "whats your names" mai answers "mai" he looks at me, so does tall guy "shadow liu" i say.
"Well mai, shadow i wanted you to know that your going to be late for class cuz the bell just rung" Kazuya points out, i shake my head at mai
"Your going to be late" i pointed out quietly
Then it clicks in mais mind
"Im late" mai says running
"Arent you going?" Kazuya asked.
"Yeah" i said.
I walked off hearing "shes so quiet"
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I dont think i did well... anyways Sorry we end there goodbye and ill work on the chapters on my trip bye~ or wait no ill work on the chapters when i get home. Anyways if theres anything I spelled wrong tell me and be judgy when ur telling me what i did wrong and if theres any questions ill answer them the best i can but other than that bye and have a good day see ya homies