Write the murder. Write this in huge detail. You should have so much detail that the reader would have a clear picture in their head. Does the person who's about to get killed see the murderer, or is he/she taken by surprise? Describe the victim's feelings right before he/she gets killed. Describe the setting of the murder. Try something like, The golden statue shone in the silver moonlight that came through the thick glass windows. Paul stared into the broken glass, his eyes not moving from the person's face as the statue came down on him. His piercing scream was stopped as the statue came next to his scarlet ear...
