Kaitou Joker stuff

A little help?

So I've made this story about a bunch of deres and the reader. I'm not sure if I want to publish it here or in Quotev.

Basically, it's part of a magic AU. All the deres has a type of magic that they specially mastered and are disguised as magicians or something else to gain reputation. The reader is a journalist who exposes one of the magicians tricks. She/He is then brought into an unknown place where she has to stay for being "disrespectful".

I'm still figuring out the story so if there are any suggestions, please give me. I'll gladly take them into consideration.

So this begs another question, should I change the storyline? Do you think it will attract people to read?

Please tell me your suggestions! ^0^