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*PS*- The picture above is Jayden's house.

"Claire, I can't do this. You know that guy really makes me lose my cool."

 
"Elena, let's go. It'll be fine. Besides, I'll be there with you the whole time."


We got out of the car heading to Jayden's house. Wow the house was huge and lightings were just perfect.

 
Claire pressed the door bell and this guy who looked really drunk opened it. 

"Hi ladies, welcome." He said with a wink. Arrgh! I really want to get out of here.

The music inside almost burst my ear drum. We walked through a crowd of people grinding, 

kissing.. Argh! The whole place smelled of sweat and alcohol.

 "Oh look who made it to my party?" I looked up to see the guy I didn't want to see. 

But of course it was his party so I would see him.

 "I just came as an escort for Claire. We won't be long." "Doesn't matter you're still here" he said 

with that annoying smirk on his face.

"I don't have the heart to be nice to you." "I'm gonna go grab a drink." "I know you love me too" 

he said before I walked into what I imagined was the kitchen. It was magnificent. This guy was 

really rich. That's why he was so cocky and rude. I grabbed soda from the fridge. I didn't want 

alcohol because I know how I react when I drink. I didn't want that at this party. I walked out 

with the intention of looking for Claire. Where did this girl go? She was supposed to stick with 

me not leave me to deal that idiot.(Jayden).

As I walked through the crowd looking for Claire, I bumped into someone. Why do I always do 

that?! I looked up to see Carl. Just great! "Well well, look who's here. 

If it isn't the little b*tch who slapped me." "Watch your words you disgusting piece of sh*t."

 I shot back. "Ooo what will you do? Hit me again? You wouldn't dare."

With that, he dragged me from the crowd by the hair. "Get your filthy hands of me." was all I 

could say as I struggled from his grasp on my hair. Damn did that hurt. He dragged me into the 

bathroom and locked it. "What do you think you're doing?!" "Giving you wanted you deserve. 

I told you'll pay for hitting me" "Even though such a b*tch, I can't get my eyes of you. 

I think that'll go away when I finally have you." "No!! please let me out now!" 

I said hitting him with all my strength "Sorry sweetie, your screams are useless so might as well give in. 

I promise it won't hurt." I immediately hit between his legs and run for the door. He dragged me by the hair and hit me so hard that I had that metallic taste in my mouth. 

My head really hurt. Please someone save me! He started kissing my lips and my neck. It was so this disgusting.

 I spat on his face. "Wrong move, sweetheart." He said as he wiped his face. He slapped me again. 

I heard the sound of footsteps in the halls near the bathroom. I started screaming. 

Soon the sound of footsteps disappeared. Oh Lord I'm really going to be raped. I thought crying. 

Just then I heard the door knob turning. Thank God!

There stood Jayden. I've never been so happy to see him. I saw the furious look on his face as he 

looked at Carl like a tiger who has seen his prey. 

He immediately put Carl against the wall and hit him till he bled so much.

 I stopped him from hitting him more because honestly it looked like Jayden would never stop. 

Jayden looked at me and calmed down. "Get out of here, you son of a b*tch before I kill you. 

Don't you ever lay a finger on her again." He yelled at Carl almost hitting him again. He turned to 

me and looked at me intently, his blue eyes filled with worry and asked "Are you okay?" as he 

cupped my cheek. "I'm fine" I said without looking at him. I felt so embarrassed. 

I didn't even want to thank him. He kept looking at me intently making me quiver. What?! Aren't gonna thank me at least for saving you? 

"Thank you" I said angrily. " Why are you angry at me? I just saved you. "Elena! Elena!" I heard 

Claire yell as she came closer. She hugged me crying, telling me she was sorry for leaving me 

and that it was all her fault. I hugged her tightly. I really needed that. 

"Claire it's not your fault." "Can we just go home?" I said. "Of course. Thanks Jayden. God bless 

you." Claire said. Jayden's eyes met mine. 

They were still filled with so much worry. What was this? Now he cares for me? 

I broke our eye contact with him as Claire led me out of the hallways into the crowd. Luckily for me, the weren't so much people staring.

I think a lot of people didn't notice. How did Jayden know. We walked to the parking lot. 

I sat in the car and Claire started the car. "Elena I'm really sorry I shouldn't have forced you to 

come to this party much less leave you." Claire said sobbing. "Claire it's okay. It's totally not your fault. 

"Just get me home, please. I need my bed" "okay."  I looked out the window the whole ride 

drowned in the thoughts of how horrible this night turned out and how worse it would've have 

been if Jayden had not showed up. Thank God!

*An hour later...

"I'll see you at school tomorrow." Claire said hugging me. I hugged her back saying I might not 

be able to come tomorrow. "Okay take your time. I love you." "I love you too." I watched her as 

she drove off and gave her a last wave. I walked into the house. Luckily for me, my mom wasn't 

there. I wouldn't be ready to answer her question about dreadful I look. I ran upstairs, into the 

bathroom. I looked at my face in the mirror. I looked horrible. My make up was totally ruined and 

I had a cut on my lip. I felt so disgusted. I quickly took a long shower and went to bed.






How was this chapter.

I know you all hate Carl, including me. Lol

I'm started to like Jayden

Hope you guys liked this chapter.


I know I haven't updated in so long. I'm really sorry. I've been busy.
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Till the next chapter

xoxoxo
Riley❤

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