The Dome

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I talked to my mum who started crying. She explained how she nearly lost me but how correy persuaded them to keep on going. He fought for my life. I couldn't ask for more.

Everything was so weird now. I remembered being in my coma. Not all of it of course but some of it. I remember it felt like I was asleep. But awake. I could hear, everything, everyone and every sound. Every breathe. I knew who people were and when people were around.
I could feel every touch but was paralysed. I couldn't see anything. I couldn't even open my eyes. I couldn't move or talk. Everyday I was screaming inside trying to make someone hear me. I tried to squeeze my mums hand when she touched it. But I couldn't. I felt trapped. Like I was well under a dome. And that no one could possibly know how I was feeling and there was a huge barrier stopping me from shouting out someone help me. I was so confused at that point I didn't even know what had happened. I though I was insane.

One day correy visited me. I felt so happy inside but just couldn't show it. He held my hand the whole time and stayed there as long as he could. He would say things, things that make me shiver inside. He would say
'Maddie please wake up. I love you. I miss you. I'm so sorry this is all my fault.' Which it wasn't. 'Oh please I love you more then anything. You are my absolute world.'
He's all I needed. Even though he couldn't hear me, he listened.

I still felt alone and so isolated.

If I was awake I just would've had a panic attack. But I couldn't.

I don't know what woke me up. I guess something, or someone. Persuading my brain to carry on and open my eyes. So this is the end I guess. This was my story about how my brain and mind went missing. How chance split two young people apart but how love brought us back together.

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 04, 2017 ⏰

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