Honest Book Reviews

The Titan Woods

Author: @SebastianTHJ

Title: The Titan Woods

Cover: spooky, I like it.

Description: Your description, to say the least, is very long and very informational. I did have a little hard time understanding it because I really have no idea what a librarian is (unless you're talking about the people working in a library then I'm stupid af and I do know.) The only thing bad id have to say about it is that you have a lot of very simple sentences in your description and I've noticed you started a sentence or two with the word "but" which isn't very good to do because it's incorrect in the English language. You might want to refrain from having mistakes in your description because that is one of the things people look at and read before deciding to read your book. ( I have a form to have an editor help you out in my bio if you ever need one by the way.)

Chapter One: I like how you started the book, you didn't really take the time to start it off and make it awkward for the reader. I also do like the photo in the media, it's actually pretty appealing. Another thing I have seen already in this chapter, is that you had started a few sentences off with the word "but" and you have a lot of those simple sentences again, you had also started a lot of sentences with the word "and" which again, is frowned upon in the English language. I like your sense of humor that you had included in this chapter, it really gives character to the book and adds a little humor to it. Other than those things, the chapter was pretty simple and an easy read. (This isn't really related to the review but the title made me happy because it's my name and I don't know, but I thought I'd throw this in there.)

Chapter Two: Again, love the photo in the media. Other than starting sentences with "and" and "but", there's not a lot to say in the negative stand point. I can feel the story brewing and although it confuses me a little, it's quite interesting.

Chapter Three: I hadn't mentioned this before but I like how you had written this in third point of view and the chapter lengths are pretty decent as well. Although this is an action book, it took me by surprise when Sam slapped the new character (Thalia or Tassie). The book is definitely getting a lot more interesting now and I'm actually tempted to read more chapters on my own free time. Props to you on that because action isn't really my style of reading.

Characters :

There really isn't much to say because this was all written in third point of view, which is perfect for a book like this, and you didn't really describe the characters but let me try.

Sam ; you had wrote she had long hair so thank you for that. I see her having blonde hair and gray eyes, short but intimating, and if you're not a bad guy, very lovable and sweet.

Seth ; I love the S and S name naming thing going on. Seth, I see him as a bulky kid who would be your average football player. In the story, I put him at about seventeen to eight teen years old, although, he can be as young as fifteen.

Review By : @spoiledthot
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